its still not done though It's a bright and sunny Monday morning in New York . Rays of sun were coming through my closed curtains and shining in my eyes then my alarm clock went off. "Grr, fine I'm getting up. Gosh!" I turned off my screaming clock, got up and dragged myself to my closet. "Okay, What should I wear today?" I looked at all of my clothes and noticed that all my pants and jeans look the same. My shirts too, the only difference was some where plain, other where stripped and one was poke-a-dot, my mom got it for me for Christmas last year. "Okay just randomly pick." I grabbed a blue polo with white strips and a pair of jeans. I went to the bathroom, did my business andbrushed my teeth. I walked to my refrigerator, but it was empty. "I guess breakfast on the go." I put my shoes on, got my stuff and headed out. When I got outside it was the same craziness. People waving their arms just for a taxi, others were yapping away on their phones. I see my favorite donut shop, and I started to walk towards it, I catch my reflection on a window and notice that I need to hit the gym this weekend. So, I stopped andlooked around and I spot a hot dog stand. I walk up to the stand and order a hot dog with ketchup and mustard. "Coming right up." I watched the man take out a slice of bread. "Umm, excuse me, what’s the bread for?" "Your hot dog, what else would it be for?" "Aren't you suppose to use a hot dog bun?" "Well yeah, but I ran out yesterday." "What! How can you run out of hot dog buns?" "Hey, you still want your hot dog or not? “What do you think?" "Yes?" "No!" and I walked away. I kept walking till my stomach reminded me that we still need to eat, so I looked around again, I saw a Starbucks, McDonalds, and an IHOP, me and stomach both agreed on the International House of Pancakes. When I got there, there was a huge line. "Oh, that's just perfect! Might as well just stay here." I waited and waited. My stomach was yelling at me the whole time. But finally I got to the front of the line but I had to wait for a table to be opened, I saw a family of four get up and asked if I could have that table but the waiter said that it was for the people a head of me. “What?” I yelled “I’ve been in line for about half an hour” “Hey, you’re not the only one!” I heard someone yell in the back. “Well no one asked you!” “Please sir be patient.” The waiter said what sounded like an annoyed voice “What do you think I have been doing this whole time?” I pushed passed her and stormed into the kitchen. “Who’s the chef? Cuz I want some pancakes now!” they all stood there like they just saw a ghost or something. “Umm? Who are you?” a man asked as he walked up to me. “I’m hungry that’s who I am!” “What? Are you okay? “No!!” and next thing I know two men are pining me down to the floor. One of them says “You’re arrested.” They throw me into the police car and drove me to the station. THey asked for my information and took my mug shot, which I did smile. They they escorted me to a cell. "Hey, don't I get a phone call or something?" "Yeah, but later." said the policeman "What?" "Will you be quite!" came a voice from behind. I turned around and saw a huge guy getting up, he was about 6'1 I think. He had a dragon tattoo on his arm and he was bald. "oh, umm, my bad." "So, why you here." "i have no idea. all i did was|||I like it. I like the exciting stuff happening right away. It pretty much makes the book seem that there will be even MORE exciting stuff later. I don't like the first few sentences, though. They don't really hook a reader into the book. But other than that, good job!

火车采集器